First draft of Broken Souls done

Just finished up the final scene of Broken Souls this morning. The last few chapters of the book took much longer than I anticipated just trying to get all of the twists to turn the way they are supposed to. Winding up a story while simultaneously laying the groundwork for the next one is a challenge.

Rewrites should take the rest of the month, then off to the editor. If everything goes smoothly, it might still come out the last week of September. I’ll begin outlining Book 3, Broken Dragon,  while I’m doing rewrites. I’m hoping to have about a third of the first draft of Book 3 done before the edits on Book 2 come back. I’d love Broken Dragon to come out before the end of the year, if possible.

I’ll post the cover design for Broken Souls a week or two before the book is released.


Broken Souls draft nears completion;
Kindle Unlimited

If you’ve been following the little bar chart on the right side of this page, you know that I’m 80% through the first draft of Book 2 of The Chronicles of Mara Lantern entitled Broken Souls. I expect to be done by the end of next week. Then it’s on to rewrites and the editing and formatting process. I’m still hopeful that the book will be out before the end of September, but a lot depends on if it gets through the editing process without any major hitches.

I will begin writing Book 3, Broken Dragon, while Book 2 is being edited, so my hope is it will come out shortly before or after the holidays, again, depending on the editing process. I’m fairly certain I can have the first draft of that book done in time.

On a separate note, the launch of Amazon’s new Kindle Unlimited program kind of threw a hitch into all of my evaluations of whether or not to remain exclusive to Amazon going forward. Unlimited allows readers to pay a monthly subscription fee of $9.99 to “borrow” ebooks instead of buying them outright, but Amazon compensates authors who participate.

Not to get too deep into the weeds, Broken Realms has gotten a healthy number of borrows and I’d like to see if this continues and what impact it has on sales. So, for at least the next three months, the book will remain exclusive to Amazon.

How that goes will determine whether it stays exclusive and whether or not the rest of the series participates in the Amazon programs. If you have any thoughts, feel free to let me know.


Check out the interview

I did an interview with Connie Brentford over at about writing in general and about the Mara Lantern series. Check it out.


Wrong, just way wrong, I think

Going into this whole fiction thing, I made a few assumptions, not consciously, but you know, I just thought things were a certain way, and it turns out they are not. For example, when I made the decision to make the protagonist in the Mara Lantern series a young woman, I assumed that male readers would probably not be interested. My original thought was Mara would be a guy, but technically adroit women are much more interesting than their male counterparts, and I’m not just talking about the fictional ones.

Turns out I’ve got some male readers, and not just a few. I’ve not done a survey, but there are more than I assumed there would be.

Another assumption I made was the vast majority of ebook readers were Kindle readers, like me. There’s no denying that Amazon is the big kahuna in the market, but I’m starting to think that their percentage in the market isn’t as much as it used to be. You see, I just finished up with a member giveaway at LibraryThing in which I am giving away 100 review copies of Broken Realms in ebook format. I offered a choice of EPUB or Kindle format. About half of the winners have gotten back to me and it is running 50-50, which surprises me. Now, that might just be the make up of the membership of LibraryThing, but I doubt it.

Anyway, for me it was a bit of an epiphany. It also indicates that my participation in Amazon’s exclusive program (KDP Select) is probably not the best long-term strategy. That being said, I do get the feeling that for my first three months in the marketplace, it has helped me get the book and the series established, at least to some degree. I definitely got a significant bump in sales during the Countdown Deal I ran last month, and, after the deal ended, sales leveled off at a slightly (very slightly) higher level.

My three-month enrollment in KDP Select runs out at the end of July. Most likely, I will not renew and begin distributing my books to the other online book retailers. Just to make sure, I’m running a pricing experiment for the next two weeks to see if I can replicate the results of the Countdown Deal without having the benefit of appearing on Amazon’s Countdown Deal pages. The price of Broken Realms has been lowered back down to 99 cents temporarily and I’ve done a bit of marketing, so if I get a sales bump comparable to what happened last month, then there’s no real benefit to staying exclusive to Amazon.

I’ll know in a couple of weeks, but I’m pretty sure The Chronicles of Mara Lantern will be showing up at B&N, iBooks, Kobo and a few other places real soon.

How’s Book 2 coming? Little slower than I anticipated at this point, but I’m determined to make a September publication date.


Giveaways and more giveaways

If you are a LibraryThing fan, you can sign up to get a ebook review copy of Broken Realms until July 1. You can find the book listed here. (Of course, if you are in a hurry and don’t want to sign up on LibraryThing, you can simply request a review copy directly from me on this page.)

If you like print books and are a member of Goodreads, you can enter to win one of 10 paperback editions of Broken Realms. This giveaway is open until July 18. You can enter to win here. (You will need to sign into Goodreads, and it is limited to folks in the U.S. ’cause I don’t want to pay more for shipping than the books are worth.)



Book 2 and sundry other items

I’ve added a progress bar to the Reader Update page so readers can see how Book 2 (Broken Souls) is coming along. I think I’m into a rhythm with the story now and I’m writing about two scenes a day. At that pace, the first draft should be done by the second week of July. Rewrites will take at least a couple of weeks more. Then it goes off to the editor. If all goes well, we’re still looking at a September release.

The Countdown deal at Amazon saw a definite bump in sales of Broken Realms, but the price is back up to $3.99 and will likely stay there at least until Book 2 comes out. I might consider doing another 99-cent deal on Book 1 when Book 2 comes out, but we’ll see. I’m thinking about dropping out of Amazon’s select program that gives them an exclusive on the books. There might be some benefit to distributing more widely to Barnes & Noble, Kobo, iBooks, etc…

One other note: If you’ve read the book, please take a minute and write a review on Amazon, we’re still going really slow on that front and it really does matter to the success of a book (and its author.) Thanks.

Also, I can provide a review copy if you know someone who is interested in writing and  posting a review online. Just send them to the review copy request page.

Always open to ideas and suggestions from readers, so drop me a line if you like.


99-cent Countdown Deal

Amazon has these limited-time promotions called Countdown Deals. You’re supposed to look at the page and freak out about running out of time to buy something before the price goes up. I think there may actually be a countdown clock or something on the page.

Anyway, HURRY, the Kindle version of Broken Realms will be 99 cents starting at midnight tonight and ONLY until June 8, then the price goes back to $3.99. I can hardly catch my breath.

Seriously, if you have a friend who might be interested, it would be a good time to make a recommendation that would save them three bucks. I might not be discounting the book again for quite a while.



Mara Lantern Facebook Fan Page

I knew I would have to tackle the whole social media thing eventually, but I finally ran out of time. I got an email from a reader who was appalled that I didn’t have a page set up, so I spent a couple of hours putting it together this morning.

Next thing you know, I’ll be tweeting. Hah!

Go click the LIKE button at the Mara Lantern fan page. Post a comment or question or something so it doesn’t look so bare.

I’ll have to add some LIKE buttons to this site. I’ll dig around and figure that out in a minute.


Broken Realms now available in print

The print version of Broken Realms (The Chronicles of Mara Lantern, Book 1) is now available for order on Amazon. Right now the cost is $10.79. (Amazon has discounted the list price of $11.99, so don’t be surprised if the price fluctuates.)  Here’s a direct link to the paperback’s product page.

If you get a minute…

I have an aversion to marketing and begging, so this will be one of the rare occasions I do it here: If you’ve read Broken Realms, I would appreciate it if you would take the time to write a short, honest review on Amazon. Here’s the link directly to the book.

At some point in the future (probably after Book 3 of the series is available) I will begin to use some of the online sites that market books and most of them require a minimum number of reviews before they will consider your book worthy. I refuse to buy reviews or nag friends and family for them. Probably makes me a bad marketer. Guilty.